Friday, 26 November 2010

Final Story Idea

The scene is set in a wooded area which seems to be deserted. A guy steps out of the car and slowly walks around to the boot where he slowly begins to open it up. As he leans in to the boot there is a young girl tied up in the boot, with tears and mascara running down her face. She begins to panic as he leans in towards her. She tries to escape but the guy pushes her back into the boot with force, where she slightly blacks out.

The full story then begins where we see a young girl called Isabelle in the toilets obsessing about her looks. She applies her foundation, then lipstick, making sure that it’s all done perfectly. Then on to her hair, making sure that every strand is in place. She follows by sorting out her clothes, making sure they are in the right place and looks as good as possible. After finishing making herself look perfect, Isabelle walks into an empty cubicle where she drops her books on the floor, picks up her phone and begins to call someone, then shuts the door so nobody can see its her talking. Isabelle then comes out of the cubicle, washes and dries her hands, grabs her books and vainly checks her appearance again and walks out of the toilets. Isabelle walks down the corridor at college where she catches her reflection, once again checks her appearance and walks back off down the corridor. As she is walking through college a geeky guy bumps into her and they both drop their work on the floor. In disgust Isabelle looks down at the books where the geeky guy is scurrying to pick everything up for her. He sneakily slips his phone number into one of her notebooks. He looks up and hands Isabelle her notebooks. He smiles cheekily as Isabelle looks at him and snatches the books away from him and walks off down the corridor. The geeky guy watches her walking off. He see’s Isabelle stop and look at her notebook where he has placed his phone number. His heart begins to race when he see’s Isabelle taking out his number and looking at it. She then screws it up in disgust, throws it on the floor and walks off. We see the pain and anguish on the geeky guys face as he witnesses this, and he then walks away.

Isabelle walks into the college canteen where out of the corner of her eye she spots one of the hottest guys in college. She smiles quickly and walks towards the guy. Instead of sitting down and speaking to him, she sits down and ignores him trying to play hard to get which works. As the hot guy catches her out of the corner of his eye and looks at her and smiles. He begins to talk to her; they both laugh and giggle about college life, and the guy asks her to come with him to a party. The hot guy then leans in close to Isabelle to try and kiss her, but once again playing hard to get Isabelle moves her head so that he is looking at her cheek. The guy whispers in to her ear and Isabelle smiles and nods, so he rushes up and walks off. However behind Isabelle, at the canteen window the geeky guy witnesses the whole thin and his heart is broken. He puts his hand on to the window longing for what he cant have, and walks off in upset. The hot guy returns with a drink he has gone and brought Isabelle. He sits down and slides it across into her hand, to show she is grateful she kisses him gently on the cheek to make him wish he was with her, and walks off.

Isabelle after the college day walks off to the party where she has too much to drink and is very drunk. Isabelle then begins to make her way home alone and seems to have lost her belongings which she had taken to the party, which seem to not bother her now. She stumbles down the road in her high heeled shoes, whilst swigging out of her bottle. She stops and takes off her shoes, and carries on walking home, trying to keep in a straight line. Isabelle then constantly drops her shoes many times and forgets to pick them up. As she is walking she becomes paranoid about the footsteps from behind her so she begins to pick up the pace a little. She looks behind her again where a guy is still following her a little faster. She decides to pick up the pace once again. She turns around he is still following her but even faster this time. She panics and begins to run for her life. She runs down the streets as fast as she can, constantly checking behind her, but the guy is still there. She begins to panic and tries to loose him. It doesn’t work. She runs and runs. But she stumbles over and hits the floor. She looks up at the guy, with fear in her eyes.

Isabelle then begins to come around in the boot of a car, tied up and gagged. She can’t scream for help. She then see’s the boot open. Towering over her is the geeky guy with wrath in his eyes. As he leans in to the boot there is a young girl tied up in the boot, with tears and mascara running down her face. She begins to panic as he leans in towards her. She tries to escape but the guy pushes her back into the boot with force. Isabelle watches the geek bend down and picks up a huge branch from the tree, she begins to panic. He then comes back over to the car and angrily rips off the tape off her mouth, so he can hear her speak. He leans the trunk on the car and walks around to the passenger door to put his coat on. When he is out of sight, Isabelle begins to frantically try and undone the tape which is tightly wrapped around her hands. She stops and lays dead still as the geeky guy comes back. He grabs the stick, drags it behind him as he slowly walks away from the car. He grabs it tight. Slowly begins to higher it above his head and brings it down in anger.

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